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It seems that the smile have a special magic.When we get in trouble,Maybe a smile can encourage us to go out of troubles. I still remember the last term,I did badly in English and I failed in the exam.I felt deep depression.At this time,My English teacher said to me"Nobaby will be successful without working hard,Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it."There was a smile on her face just like the sun in the winter,That made me feel very warm.Thanks to her,I get good grade in another exam. Let's face life with the smile