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A new announcement is delivered to our community that a company is willing to build a large factory here. This construction may make our life advanced, however, everything has two sides, it might also cause some disadvantages to us. A new factory will certainly benefit us in many aspects. It could offer a wealth of job opportunities for our community, a portion of us could be offered chances to be employed. That is of course good news to laborers who don’t have jobs, for they could get into the factory and earn more money to raise their families. What’s more, the factory’s operation will promote the development of its surrounding areas in commerce, food and beverage, traffic and transportation service, and then gradually form a new business district. Our residents could get more convenience from the new business district, for example, we could have dinner in the restaurants or go shopping in a new supermarket. On the other hand, the new factory might also adversely affect our life. The factory, inevitably, will produce some waste and by-product which is toxic and does harm to our environment, then bring about some potential effect on our health. Air, as well as water, is to be polluted easily. We might lose our clean air and water, and suffer the diseases in lungs and stomachs. Also, the factory may produce noise at night and in the early morning, which will affect we residents’ rest. If we don’t sleep well, we might feel exhausted when working, or even make mistakes. In my view, I oppose the construction of the factory. The factory should never do harm to us residents, especially to our health and rest, even if the factory offers job opportunities and promotes the economy. The factory should be located away from any living quarters, and before being carried out, it should be verified strictly.
