作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;副词使用偏多。
There is no End to Learn there is the old saying that never too old to learn that is say education is not complete with graduation. There are wrong idea that people generally though study just books. There is no end to learn, because there are follow resons. Firstly, learning not simlpy study book, but learn culture or some common sence, so person need to learn to those more than the books. Second, before the 20th, there are no many way to learn knowledge until the internet develop. so people can learn with the internet. Finally, our customs teach us that learning never ending and keep in pace with age. Thus we need to learn with the age in advance. There is no end to learn before died. We are here that add to what learn it, but till what to life.
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