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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;副词使用偏多。

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There is no End to Learn there is the old saying that never too old to learn that is say education is not complete with graduation. There are wrong idea that people generally though study just books. There is no end to learn, because there are probably several reasons. Firstly, learning not simply mean take in book, but learn culture or some common sense, so people need to learns to those more than the books. Second, before the 20th, there are not many ways to gain knowledge until the internet develop. So people can learn with the internet. Finally, our customs teach us that learning never ending and keep in pace with age. Thus we need to learn with the age in advance. There is no end to learn before died. We are here that add to what learn it, but till what to life.

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