文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;副词使用偏多。
There is no End to Learn there is the old saying that never too old to learn that is say education is not complete with graduation. There are wrong idea that people generally though study just books. There is no end to learn, because there are probably several reasons. Firstly, learning not simply mean take in book, but learn culture or some common sense, so people need to learns to those more than the books. Second, before the 20th, there are not many ways to gain knowledge until the internet have developed. So people can learn with the internet. Finally, our customs teach us that learning never ending and keep in pace with the times. Thus we need to learn with the times in advance. There is no end to learn before died. We are here to add what we can learn it, but to reback what we give life.
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