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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3376
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

Different people have different views on the honesty.Some people think that the honesty is a glory whereas others argue that honest is a wrong. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that honesty is the most beautiful coat in our life.For one thing,I firmly believe that honesty is fundamental in life,because it can make others trust us.For another,honesty is a prerequisite for success.If one lost honesty ,no one will help him again.Just think of the story that The Wolf Is Coming. Talking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that honesty is the most beautiful coat.Only if to be honesty can we create a beautiful world.

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