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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。
As the society developing,more and more people like to use the computer to communicate instead of face-to face contact.Because the Internet is more convenient and more quickly,but also the electronic communication can save much more time,today,people live a fast life.Nowadays,electronic developments have played an important part in human's life. Due to the distance,parents hope that they can know about much more their children's live environmentAnd they can not often go to see their babies for they have also many business.So parents must keep touch with their children by electronic communication. As far as I am concerned,although the electronic machines can make our talk more easily,they can not replace face-to-face contact.Face-to-face contact can contribute to people's relation and give people a feeling of kind.
