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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

As the society developing,more and more people like to use the computer to communicate instead of face-to face contact.Because the Internet is more convenient and more quickly,but also the electronic communication can save much more time,today,persons live a fast life.Nowadays,electronic developments have played an important part in human's life. Due to the distance,parents hope that they can know about much more their children's live environment.And they can not often go to see their babies because of the many business.So parents must keep in touch with their children by electronic communication. As far as I am concerned,although the electronic machines can give our talk more easily,they can not replace face-to-face contact.Face-to-face contact can contribute to people's relation and give people a kind of feeling.

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