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作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
There is brief history of world commercial fishing over 95 years. In 1900, only one fisher tried to fish on broad sea with varying types of fish, compared to an overwhelming number of acquisitive fishers in 1995 who merely left one fish in the sea still struggled to exploit the biological resource. The pictures vividly depict that the shrew human masters a great skill to tap resource of nature by whatever means far beyond the capability of ancient, thus, it inevitably renders the dramatic disaster. The phenomenon is not isolated. by modern condition, human can drain the river, flooding the valley, tearing the mountain apart as well as deforest the land in order to fulfill their needs, without considering the undesirable consequence. The primary reason of over exploitation is that the conservation yields to acquisition. while the government often lays a stress on environmental protection and sustainable development, it can’t completely restrain the selfish man with shortsighted chasing after profits , in that they have not yet grasped the seriousness of crisis that they are tightly bound up with. It is time to raise the alarm, as our resources is on the rope. firstly, raising the awareness is play a prominent role, because to preserve resource rests on every civilian. Secondly, the sever punishment should be carried out to impose on those who stress themselves profits over the collective and breach the law. Only both ways can we spell splendid future of our ecological system.
