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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9027
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

The internet on learning As is illustrated in the picture,a student asks his teacher if it is all the education he needs once he learns how to use Google.We can acquire the internet' great effect on education. With the development of the internet,it is more and more convenient for us to get enormous information.But does it mean we can get all the education we need. Personally,I think it won't.Firstly,the internet is abound with information which is created by internet user.As a result,it can be false sometimes.Moreover,the internet can't teach the students personal qualities,which teachers can do it well.In addition,we can't make an effectively communication that is important for study.At school,you will get a good chance to debate with your classmates by which you will get progress swiftly. Generally speaking,it is my view that getting information by Google can't take place the teachers' education.As students,we should study mainly with teacher.The information on the internet can be just used as a preference.

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