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We can have many kinds of lifes that we want to and the value of life is different from person to person,but I think the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. For us students,I think the greatest things are that developing our advantages and having a habbit and learning as much things as you can and making friends from who you can learn many things that can help you in the life.The most important thing is that we should engage ourselves in the things which we interested in so that we can feel intersted and enjoy ourselves.What's more,only in this way can we have the largest space to progress and more easier for us to gain achivements and success. our lives are not very long so we should make our lives as happy as possible,thus we should do things that we are interesting in and spend most time in them.In this way,not only can we have a happy life but also it is more easier for us to gain success and achivements that we want.
