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文中词汇表达较恰当，学术词汇表达灵活；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
From the graphic we can easily know that students use of computers plays an increasingly important role in their life.Nearly the computer becomes a must for students.From where I stand,there are 3 possible factors influencing the phenomenon. The most vital motivation to promote its widespread use is its multiusefulness of computer.For example,students can search much information on line and learn on line. With the rapid development of science technowledge,it becomes more and more useful.What's more,to a degree,students can afford it with lower price than it was.The last but least,it is to keep pace with the development of society that students are required to master the computer. However,the use of computer maybe not only distracts students' attention but affects their study.Students are liable to be induced by the massive temptation on line,which is bad for them.Only when they make use of the computer with a limitation can they benefit much from it. In my opinion,students should not use computer excessively.They had better regulate the time limitation when using computer.
