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why it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket As we all know, there are many disadvantages in putting all your eggs in one basket and it's also unwise. First of all, it means that you'll have a high risk with broken and you have on idea to undertake a high psychological pressure and even you'll become crazy.How huge loss you will have! Moreover,it sounds like a pool of dead water,don't have a vivid and creative think. maybe, it will help you tend to be more foolish.Last but not least, if you have a succeed in getting a pay, and you will just make a few profits. Let me see, what will happen if we put our eggs in several baskets? without doubt, it's beneficial for our decisions. for instance, you can avoid in undertaking all the risks in facing broken, furthermore, if you put your eggs in several baskets it equals to that you will make abundant profits and it can also pay back in bulk. Meanwhile, you will become happy, creative and wise. We can also relate it to our college life . We can spend our time in studying,entertaining ,having a part-time job, and having a exercise. that sounds colorful and meaningful.if we just spend our time in studying sounds boring. that is to say , if we put our eggs in one basket is unwise.
