托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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Competition is one of the most important driving force to push our society to develop. No matter what kind of competition is, sport would be the most direct form of competition. As a result, there are countless sports competitions today, running, boxing, football, basketball etc. One of the most representative example among them would be the Olyinpic Games. Despite wide range of people who participating these sport games, people rarely remember the athletes who are not the champagne. This sad truth leads to a contention that the final destination of sport is to win the game and this point of view has so gained our acceptance that many of realism firmly believe in it. However, I completely disagree with this point of view, instead, I would like to take a dialect thinking toward this contention. For sport belongs to everyone irrespective of one's age, gender and profession. Participating the sport would bring to us something more important than just championship, like fitness, energy, good attitude and healthy relationship with others. Therefore, taking sport is not just win something but gain something that really matters us.