2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a beautifui place,which locate in the south of xiangjiang river,there has fresh air,biue sky and beautiful landscapes,it is not a well-developed region though.i would like to take you to visit some interesting place in here if you come here. the first place i'd like to show you is ZuoZongTang square,what the most attractive aspect is the long history.on entering here,you can feel the thick cultural atmosphere,with the exception of it,there have many