2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In chian,there are many interestingplace.Specially,West lake is the most interestingplace.To begin with,West lake is beautiful place,in there,there are one mountion,tow towers,three islands,three dikes,five lakes.Some of them consist of a amazing place.A own interesting town--Leifeng town,which it is said that the white snake whose name is Suzhen Bai was under it.