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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
If a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community,what would you do? Maybe some people will welcome to it,as a result of having a contribution to the advance of the local economy.On the other hand,it will create large quantities of employment opportunities for the youth.And finally it will enhance the core competitiveness of their district. Just as a proverb goes,"Every coin has two sides".The others hold the opposite attitude that the pollution of environment,such as water pollution,air pollution,traffic jams,will become more and more fierce as a result of building a large factory near our community.Finally,people will regret the decision they have ever made.And they have to waste a lot of money to control all kinds of pollution which is harmful to our health. In my opinion,I hold the idea the disadvantages of building a large factory near your community are outweigh the advantages of it.It's much more easy to pollute the environment than to protect the environment.Why not cherish it when the skye is blue?
