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新东方托福高分作文:好孩子是什么样的?

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:22浏览次数:659
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【题目要求】

What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

【题目分析】

共有8道题问及各种人的qualities或者characteristics。最好的答案:intelligence; honesty; a sense of humor。这些都是所有的人都应具备的基本优点。类似的还有optimistic and positive; politeness; loyalty; perseverance; justice等等
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In the modern world,everyone has his or her own oppioion about what are the important qualities of a good son or daughter.There is no doubt that some characteristics are acceptable in common to be important.Such as intelligence,honesty,a sense of humor or loyalty and so forth. From my point of view,I consider that to be a good son or daughter should be honest and deligent also should respect their parents.First of all,not only is it so significant for being a good off-spring to be honest.But also it is one of the fundamental qualities to be a human being and to be socially successful,to be popular in among your peers.What's more,it is the key to achieve your goal that to be deligent all the time.In the other word practice makes perfect.Last not the least,learning to respect others is the basis factor for keeping our world hamony. In sum,in my view,it is honesty,deligenty and respectness that are most important factors to be a good child.

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