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2012年2月25日雅思大作文真题:大学生是否应多参与业余活动

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:03浏览次数:3090
要求:

【题目要求

Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to involve other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

全日制大学生需要花很多时间学习,但是也应该参加其它活动。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

【关键词分析】

other activities

这是一个范围很广的词,包括课外活动、社交活动、义务劳动、兼职工作等。因此这道题目的展开的余地非常广。

【话题分类与题型】

本题是新题,属于教育类话题,题型为同意与否(单观点)。教育类话题是往年出现最高频的题目,上一次出现这类话题是在2012年1月14日。

【话题评价】

这道题目属于教育类话题,属于“社会实践”类分支,但是和“教育内容”这个分支也有很大的相似之处。虽然本题没有直接在雅思考试中出现过,但是类似的题目已经出现过无数次了,在G类考试中也多次出现。考生只要准备过相关的话题,就一定有话可说。

【类似话题】

1. Some people believe that some unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (e.g. working in a charity, improving the relationship of neighbourhood or teaching sports to children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2. Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

3. Some students do part-time jobs during studying. Do you think it has more advantages or disadvantages?

4. Schools should concentrate on teaching children academic subjects which are useful in their future careers. Subjects like music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

【结构与思路】

本题建议采取双边支持型,同意题目中的观点。建议采取五段式,正文的前两段花主要篇幅讲课外活动及社会实践的重要性,侧重点从培养学生的能力出发。正文第三段让步,承认学习的重要性。结论是学生应该在不影响学习的前提下参加课外活动及社会实践。

用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
评语:

作者词汇基本功很好,学术词汇表达也比较恰当;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

It is undoubted that college is the significant position to develop the persons’ abilities. So what is the university life be, will be better to suit university students? Some people assert that students should spend all time studying, whereas others take the view that it is indispensable for students to join other activities. I completely side with the latter opinion. There are a few reasons rendered below. That sport is a very important activity. Doing sports is good for not only the health, but also enlarging the circles of friends. For example, football is one of the aerobics sports, by playing football is contribute to enhance our heart and lung function. Besides, it is a kind of group sporting, when playing football teammates need to cooperate very well. Hence they will be familiar with each other naturally, further said, to be friends. Part time job is a very nice choice for students to participate during the spare time. On the one hand poor students can make money by themselves. Nowadays, the price of the college tuition and life cost is increasing dramatically. Lots of family could not afford such expensive fees for their sons or daughters. Students do part time job can reduce the economic burden fairly. For another, after experiencing the various life of the workplace, it is helpful for students to set the career target in the future. There is a very common phenomenon. Most students hope to apply for some jobs which beyond their abilities too far when they graduate from the college. By doing the part time job, they will know the working experience is very important when they hunt for jobs, and they will adjust their career targets. Admittedly, spending much time in other activities will influence the study to some extent. Especially, the homework of university is really heavy. However, we can control our activities time, and all these activities to be done without influencing the study, it is still worth to be participating. Form what we have discussed above, it is essential to involve activities in the university life.

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