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2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:36浏览次数:1491
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The Celebration of Western Festivals 
 1、现在国内不少人喜欢过西方的一些节日 
 2、产生这种现象的原因 
 3、这种现象可能带来的影响 
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With the devolopment of economic and culture, more and more western festivals have been brought into China. A tons of people enjoy celebrating Western festivals, especially young people. Western festivals have been an instant national hit. The reason why such many peole celebrate Western festivals are that, First and foremost, when we learn a foreign language, like English, French and Spnish, it is important for us to learn their culture. Secondly, a great many American TV series have been brought into China. Many young People are addicted to watching it. When come to the western festivals, they copy the scenes what they watched before. Finally,they believe that it is interesting for them to celebrate foreign festivals. It can enrich their life and make their life more colorful. There is no doubt that overcelebrate western festivals will inflict generate severe consesquence. For instance, If we always celebrate western festivals, our own festival will fade out our life. Our own culture will be gradually forgotten by us. So, I think we should protect our own culture rather than celebrating the western festivals.

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