2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Nowadays, mobile phones have become more popular in people's life.Mobile phone owners more and more, including many children.Mobile phones use increases from production technology already quite mature, caused the price of mobile phones to become very cheap, cheap to a child's pocket money can buy a month.Another reason is that, as a result of the function of the mobile phone gets great development, cell phone is no longer just the machine, it is like a computer.A lot of people in the use of mobile Internet, resulted in the excessive use of mobile phones.The harm of too much mobile phone use is very serious.Long time use mobile Internet can damage your eyes.At home, we will be less and less talking with family, instead, we've been staring at the phone.Play mobile phone, makes friends less and less of our reality.