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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11301
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用学术词汇,句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;全文结构较为严谨;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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On the Overuse of the Mobile Phone As is shown in the picture, having a mobile phone in hand and at the ready is the default mode while walking on the streets. What this cartoon symbolically reveals is that people nowadays, especially young people, are growing increasingly dependent on their mobile phones. It is true that the mobile phone has brought great convenience to people's life. 1. However, just as is illustrated in the picture, the overuse of it may lead to several bad consequences. Io begin with, there is evidence that long-term exposure to electromagnetic radiation may trigger many health problems, suNowadays, mobile phones have become more popular in people's life.Mobile phone owners more and more, including many children.Mobile phones use increases from production technology already quite mature, caused the price of mobile phones to become very cheap, cheap to a child's pocket money can buy a month.Another reason is that, as a result of the function of the mobile phone gets great development, cell phone is no longer just the machine, it is like a computer.A lot of people in the use of mobile Internet, resulted in the excessive use of mobile phones.The harm of too much mobile phone use is very serious.Long time use mobile Internet can damage your eyes.At home, we will be less and less talking with family, instead, we've been staring at the phone.Play mobile phone, makes friends less and less of our reality.ch as insomnia, headaches and even cancers. 2. In addition, when people immerse themselves in the mobile phone, they tend to pay less attention to their surroundings, posing an immediate threat to their life, health and property. Last but not least, excessive use of mobile phones means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with the people who populate their real lives. In conclusion, while mobile phones have contributed a lot to making our life more convenient, we should use them appropriately and rationally.

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