2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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I love my Nowadays, mobile phones have become more popular in people's life.Mobile phone owners more and more, including many children.Mobile phones use increases from production technology already quite mature, caused the price of mobile phones to become very cheap, cheap to a child's pocket money can buy a month.Another reason is that, as a result of the function of the mobile phone gets great development, cell phone is no longer just the machine,