托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；熟练使用了一些长难句；拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加。

there is an adage that says ,"knowledge is power",the implication being that everyone has the right to accept higher education.higher education shouldn't just be the privilege of those elite students,cause no one should assert that students who're not that excellent have no potential to be great. if we had refused the Newton's requirement of further study in the university, we would lose the chance to witness the born of a giant in science ,the same goes to Einstein the Nobel winner for his outstanding discovery in physical. all those are powerful examples which fight against the view that only the elite have access to higher education. certainly ,we can not deny the fact that those who score higher are much likely to learn better ,but i'd like to notify that higher education teach not only knowledge but also the way to improve our self-learning ability. so even if a student are not that good ,he/she can be guided to adjust themselves to a more suitable mold of studying ,which is also a benefit to them. for those reasons, we can clearly conclude that higher education should be open to everyone ,no matter how he/she is excellent or not. we are suppposed to give equal opportunities to everybody.