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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；全文结构较为严谨；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。
I would introduce Shigu Academy to my friends if some of them come to visit my home town. Shigu Academy is one of the Four Grate Academy of China.It's cultural and historical phenomenoem is one of the most attractive to tourism ,also one of the reason why I chose it to show my friends around.I'd like to show my friends the poems and articles that carved on the stone walls and rocks by ancient poet and philosopher, which is the important carrier and presentation of Chinese characters. Located at the cross of Xiang River and Zhengshui River,Shigu Academy has a charming landscape.
