2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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the most interesting place in my hometown if my foreign friend comes to my hometown,the most interesting place l'd like to take him or her to is beijing Great Wall. The Great wall has long history.It was famous in China ,many people love It. Great Wall is dynasties .First of all Great Wall is Forbidden City can open a window to every inqusi