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In our daily life,it is believe that we cann't invest all money in one project if we want to earn more money.Because all of us knows it take very high risk. It is it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket that teach us to avoid investment risk. Firstly,if we put all eggs in one basket,we take high risk losing all of the eggs.So we should divided all eggs into several baskets to make sure finally we always have some eggs.Secondly,in life, when we start to do one thing,we should tell ourselves how to do can reduce the risk of doing this thing.Sometimes,we use all estates to do one thing and we are not sure to gain all return.On the contrary, everything is changing all the time, we might get deadly upset. Thirdly,no matter what thing we will do in future,we should keep another way so that we can go when we meet failure.We should keep wise to do anything in life. As far as I am concerned, We should keep deeply "it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket"in mind.
