2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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I love to help people when they have a problem. last week, one of my classmates was upset at the corner, I went towards her and tried to let her better. And then I realized her exam was not very good. So I told her everything have to practise and practise again that it can get perfect. after a while, she smiled and told me she would persist to study. And the other accsion was when I was walking in the street, a mother asked people who ever saw her daugter. she was black skin, so I could saw her doughter who was near me and far away her, the girl who seemed to find her mother, I took her to back to her mother, that s very dangerous thing because the mother just was shopping and did not take care her child.