2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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I love to help people when they have a problem.Last week, one of my classmates was upset at the corner, I went towards her and asked her what happened. And then I realized her exam was not very good. So I told her everything had to practise more that it could get perfect.After a while, she smiled and told me she would persist in studying. And the other occasion was when I was walking in the street, one mother asked people who ever saw her daughter. She had black skin, so I could see a girl who was near me, the girl who seemed to find her mother,too. I took her to back to her mother, that s very dangerous thing because the mother just shopped and did not take care of her child.