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作者词汇表达恰当，同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇；作者在句法层面做的很棒；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
The oil lamp, with child-like smile, so innocent and pure ,which is a symbol of love of human, is giving out bright flame against the dark.the cartoon tends to illustrate that with regard to love,the dark room it is, the brighter it looks.indeed,the love plays a prominent role when people is in the critical condition . The best example in point in my mind is the earthquake occurring in Wenchuan of Sichuang province,in 2008, which was the most degree that I have ever hear, linked to thousands of people losing their home and families. At the same time, the catastrophe also caused the physical as well as mental problem. Fortunately, there are many charitable organizations and volunteers devoting to aid them restore their home, to give them health care. It was the love that help them evade the horrible story and rebuild the confidence to live. As youngsters, we should carry a substantial weight for the love, because to show the love is not merely the one's virtue reflecting but also the responsibility we should shoulder. Therefore, we should grasp the seriousness of love and convey love by dedicating to our jobs and our nation, willing to help people in need,trying our best to make a contribution to our nation.
