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What a nice day! i am so glad that I can do my first dairy for myself. To be honest , although my English is so poor , still I want to try my best to study English . A couple of day before , when I see the motto : some people succeed because they are destined to , but most of people succeed because they are determined to by Charles Dickens. So , sometimes. I think about the question alone, why they can do something that I can't. Recently, when I recollect the film the pursuit of happiness the leading role want to become a stockbroker , but there is a premise that he don't know anything about the stock at all before. It is miracle that he got it with incredible faith and firm tear In short. This is a story about a man who step by step creep to the peak of life. So I always rember a dialogue why can't I be like them happiness. However, I wanna talk to myself a motto be yourself, everyone else is already taken. Last but not least , I will be succeed.
