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Dear George, very glod to have received your letter.now i'd like to tell you about household hotels in my hometown.The household hotel is nice to stay in.Not only can you learn about China cleary,but also you can feel at home as well by dining with the family for only 20 yuan a day,of course you can cook by yourself if the menu dosen't satisy you,you can bathe and swim in the sea,climd the hill and do anpaid jods,in the green house if you like to.I 'm looking foward to your comeing. Best wish to your family. Your's LiHua