托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Living in rural area or city depends on every person's personality. Some one love to live in the quiet and peaceful place while somebody enjoy living in crowded city where it is a good place to work or shopping. For my part, I consider living in city is superior choice for me. Yes, many people would say people who is living in city suffer much from the air or water pollutant which could directly affect their healthy condition. However, we cannot forget that people who is living in city could earn more money, enjoy more advanced public facility and make more friends who are from different country with different cultural background. Even though there are some disadvantage of living in the city, I wholeheartedly contend the benefits of living around a lot of people overweigh advantages of living in rural area. First, Because there are copious amount of working opportunities in the big city people could find a job easily. At the same time, these kinds of job always could pay a big amount of money for people. Even the same job, like accountant, could be paid in totally different amount of money between the city and rural area. Of course, we all know people living in city needs to spend more money than in rural area to live. However, subtracting the living spending, citizens still get more disposal money to enjoy their life. Second, children could get better education if living in city. Because we know that the best educational resources, like teachers, libraries, laboratories, are always centred in big cities. Children could have more opportunities to study in a better place and easy way. They could go to museum to see some Faraday cage when they start to study the electricity part. However, there is no way for students living in rural to study in that manner. So, living in city, especially the big city, could be better for me to teach my kids. Third, big city is like a melting pot that people living there is from different place with different culture. So living in big city could enable us to make more friends and keep in touch with the state of art things. We could have open mind while talking to totally different background friends, which could make my life more colourful and rich. Any way, living in city could be my satisfying place to live. The advantages of living in big city could not overstated.