托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Education is the most prerequisite factor to influence the kid’s physical and psychological development. Even though building a new high school may always bring about some problems and trouble, the benefits definitely overweigh the disadvantages. Yes, many people would say, especially the adults who have no kids, that the school will bring a lot of trouble. For instance, the traffic near the school would might have congestion and people living near the school might be annoyed by kids. Because students are still teenagers who are still not grown up, they need more help and care from others. However, we have just heard the voice from one group of people. There are others who have kids or are teenagers contending totally different opinions. They would absolutely agree with building a new high school in the town. The first reason is that education plays so crucial role in people’s growing. This is because whether kids, teenagers or adults could get copious amount of benefits from education. Among several periods of education, the high school is the most important in my opinion. In high school, students are relatively mature in physical and psychological and they are eager to reap the knowledge to change their life and avoid their parents charge. So building a high school can enable more teenagers to go to school in our town because there is just one high school in town that cannot satiate the educational needs of every teenager. Second, the economy would be definitely boosted in our town. This is because students can stimulate the economical development around the high school. They always need to buy some stationary, books or snacks. The foresight businessman would absolutely operate some street side food stands satisfying the student’s need. At the same time, some entertainment venue would establish around school like movie theatre or shopping mall. These facilities could not only meet the student’s need but also their parents or the people living nearby. Businessman always does some business in the crowded place where can bring them a big amount of benefits. So once building a high school in our town, this area may be becoming a business quarter. Anyway, considering the benefits and disadvantages of building a new high school, I assume building a high school could be beneficial to us because it can improve the teenagers’ educational condition and stimulate the economy in our town.