2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As is vividly shown in the picture, we can see clearly that there sit a flower under the warm house in the first picture. The flower is booming very well, Always outside the vain the stom never stop and the flower is safety all the time. In the second picture, we can find that the flower is died, because the house warm vanish. The pictures are very simple, but we can lean lots of things from the cartoon. The flower growing in the warm house is the same as our children and as well as like some young people nowadays. When we were little girl or boy, our parents are always look after us very carefully, thus, we never thought to any thing, Such as we went to school, make friends with any others. Do we homework in the evening. What we should building the habits. Parents believe that we are very luckily and happily, but we feel very annoyed some times. We all live in modernization world, and that means we have to face much difficult more than our father and mother. The social is full computation and we have to lean how to deal with a lot of problems, such as work and life, dream and reality, communicate person and person. Parents can give us rich life, but they can not instead of us handle something, we must face this social after all. Love from the parents makes us not independence that depends on ourselves. In my view, as young people, we all should learn how to handle the problems. AS the parents, they should look for some chances for the children or the young people. Only this way, the warm house flowers will more and more beautiful.