字数:200满分:100分
单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
As is vividly shown in the picture, we can see clearly that there is a nice girl over there. We know that she is an American, but she is putting on a suit of Chinese traditional costumes. She is very glad for dressing on this national costumes. Alough, the picture is very simple, and we can learn a lot of things from the cartoon. On the one hand, we live in the world that information is traveled faster and faster,more and more people believe that changes of culture become important. Norwadays, as a great country, The economy of China is very booming and has more and more influential in the world. What's more, many west countries speed lots of information to Chinese. Many people like west foods and they tend to eat chip and hamburger, cabbage and so on. In our daily life, many people love to learn and spake English. It is good for us to communicate with the other persons live in the world. Some people elect to go abroad in order to make themselves life better. On the other hand, culture change attracts some questions as well as. There is a case for a child: when he was a little boy, he would be sent to an English school to obtain the perfecting English education. When he grows up, he never speaks Chinese and cannot writing a word of Chinese. Undubtly, he lost many things that he should remember and should not forget. In fact, the boy already become a west person. He thought that learning Chinese is no use at all. As Chinese, we should consider how to deal with this problem. All in all, we need to learn and absorb world culture, and in the same time, we should not ignore our traditional culture.