2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

As is vividly shown in the picture, we can see clearly that there is a young man and a young woman sit on the boat, they are sighting on the river. The man is reading the newspaper, and the woman eating the dishes and she discard lots of rubbish in the river. The man is not awareness and do not advice the woman attention to production environmential. Although the picture is very simple, we can learn a lot of tings from this cartoon. For one thing, many people elect to sightseeing anywhere on weekends because that as a chinese, a number of people become very rich and they began to care about enjoy their life. They are more attention to needs in their mood. We can understand fully meaning when we looked the picture. For the other thing,environmental pollution is very seriously. But many people throw much trish to the river, they are not considered that if they litter, they will brake out the ecological balance. They feel that environmental pollution is a small question. Due to many people ignore this problem become natural. As a result, it leads to the problem ex-prolong. We should face the problem and awake our social duty. What should we do? In my view, we should standing some lows about detection nature resource, only this way, we well have a good time when we visit anywhere and our country well have beautiful.