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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；从句不足，简单句比重高；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Our Spring Outing Last Wednesday, our teacher would let us do well something. For example, take some rubbish into the bin. So we could not make up our mind. We did not know go anywhere. Some people want to the Wu Tong Mountain. And some person want to a amusement park. In the end, we went to the amusement park. Last weekend, we went to the park. What we saw, make me very sad. The bins were empty and the ground was with empty bottles, cigratter end, piece of paper and tins. We took these rubbish into the bins. In the afternoon, when we are tired and thirty, our teacher bought some water to me. We finished the work at six o'clock this evening. We went home together.
