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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
有效的运用了一些复杂句；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。
As we see in the picture, the parients are writing e-mail to their daughter Andy just for greeting and ask her to come downstairs for something to eat.they don t contact with eachother face-to-face even they live togather,internet has impacked greatly on the way people communicate .But whether electronic communication can repelace face-to-face contect? I don t think so. For one thing,when we talk to anyone else face-to-face,we can see the face and the body language which will make us not so nervious and feel happy.It will be easier for us to get along with people and will promote emotions between us. For the other thing,our society is full of genuine humanity but thecomputer is so cold that if the face-to-face contect is replaced by electronic communication there will be less funny. In a world,face-to-face contect is very important for us .
