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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12893
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

As we see in the picture, the parents are writing an e-mail to their daughter Andy just for greeting and ask her to come downstairs for something to eat. They don t contact with each other face-to-face even they live together. Internet has impacted greatly on the way people communicate. But whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact? I don t think so. For one thing, When we talk to anyone else face-to-face, We can see the face and the body language which will make us not so nervous and feel happy. It will be easier for us to get along with other person and promote emotions between us. For the other thing, Our society is full of genuine humanity but the computer is so cold that if the face-to-face contact is replaced by electronic communication there will be less funny. In a word, Face-to-face contact is very important for us.

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