语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;请注意分段。
one year ago I read the Holmes story, and I remembered that he once told his friend: don't made a judgement at once. I think it is a very wise advice, because everyone is limited by his or her experence, which would be the base of their judgement. And our experience and opinions of course are not perfect, so maybe a wiser action is when you see something or hear something, remember it in your mind and don't make a judgement soon. You should go out and to accumulate your experience and open your mind, getting to know the diffrent lifes of the peole, and at that time, maybe you can make a wiser choice.
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