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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
It is commonly believed that human activities have exerted impacts on our planets and animals.Therefore,effcetive measures should be taken in this situation. some people argue that it is too late to take measures,our planets have been damaged seriously and there is no way to figure them out.What is more,many animals are extinct and many animals are on the verge of extinction.All these evidences demostrate that there is no solution to work them out. However,others think that we must take strong measures to change the situations,or the situations will be worse.First,we ought to popularize the importance of protection of the envioonment,which improve the environmental awareness among the people.Second,we should set laws for the protection of animals.If anyone broke the law,he will be fined or receive the punishment.Last but not least,we must reject to buy goods which from animals,such as fur ,tooth. In my view,we should pay high attention to the protection of the animal and environment.They are the important elements of our planets and we should coexist with them.
