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It is commonly believed that human activities have exerted impacts on our planets and animals.Therefore,effective measures should be taken in this situation. Some people argue that it is too late to take measures,our planets have been damaged seriously and there is no way to figure them out.What is more,many animals are extinct and many animals are on the verge of extinction.All these evidences demosntrate that there is no solution to work them out. However,others think that we must take strong measures to change the situations,or the situations will be worse.First,we ought to popularize the importance of protection of the environment,which improve the environmental awareness among the people.Second,we should set laws for the protection of animals.If anyone broke the law,he will be fined or receive the punishment.Last but not least,we must reject buying goods which from animals,such as fur ,tooth. In my view,we should pay highly attention to the protection of the animal and environment.They are the important elements of our planets and we should coexist with them.
