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Dear wangli I'm regretful tell you that I can't come the party.becuase I will go abroad deall with some company case recently. of course ,I want to attent your son birthday party very much,I hope that you can invatation mine in next year. I hope you can understand. I believe that your son's part will wery success,I hope sincere your son can grown healthly. liming