2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

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It is unconvient to our life.There are many effects in our dairy life,At first,we can not see good enough when we go out,Then it is bad for our health.However,how to reduce the haze weather is a big problem.we should plant more trees and flowers.Don't cut off trees casually.Appeal more people to add up to the team of product enviroments.We believe we will have a fresh air.