2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Today,with the development of soiety and technologe,online shopping becomes more and more popluar.Many peolpe prefer shopping online instaed of go to the mall. As we know that,there are many advantages about online shopping.First,It brings lots of conveniens to peolpe,cuts off the time go out to shop.secound,online shopping dispalys different pruductions much more that real life.It provides more choes to concumers.However,on the other hand,online shopping also has its disadvantages.It is reported that many concumers were cheated throughing online shoping.Since people get the unreal informations in online shop.What is more,the terrible matter is that it may brust your privacy out. In my opinion,online shopping is the mark of society rad development.No matter a concumer or trader you are,we should respect each other and to be honest.Finally,we should keep clamed and wised when shopping on line to prevent wasetting.