小学三年级英语作文:My school

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my school is very beatiful ,there are 24 classroom ,when you come into our shool ,you can see a many tree and grass .some chirdern is playing game , and another chirdren enjoy their football or baskeball . there are big playgound ,and fish pool ,a briage aross the pool