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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
In my opinion,I think that students are careful with our money in daily life is very good.As a modern college student,we should rational spend all of our money.We need develop the good habit of frugality. For example,with the rapid development of technology,we more and more like to shop online.One of the reasons is that we can compare the price what is the cheapest.What's more,There is a pair of eleven discount season.We shop online crazily and we can save much money.Then I always shop with my friends in a sale to buy everything we need.We like to travel,but it's so expensive for us to stay in a hotel.We have a good idea that we travel to the place where we have some friends who had been our high school classmates and they are college students all over the country.We can live their dormitory one or two nights. We have a lot of ways to save our money and in that time we know that money is easy to spend but collect hard.So I think it's wise to collect money try our best.
