小学三年级英语作文:My school

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Our school is extremly famous school , it locates at the Guangzhou. they are 24 classes ,and it has eight hurdreds students in sum. It is famous. All for students is the school feature. You can see many chirdren is playing game When you come into the school .All the studens enjoy yourself .A little pool is in the centrel of school building .