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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Being carefui with money There are some advantages of being careful with money in daily life. Nowadays,there is a argue about whether we,as students,should be careful with money, whether we should try our best to save money .I have ever heard that my classmate said, only learning how to spend money,we can make a lot money ,also,others said that we should save mooney.In my opinion,the advantage of being careful with money is more than the disadvantage. First,being careful with money is a virtue in China,which can develop and expend traditional Chinese virtue.Saving money can help us form a good habit .We should enhance the sence of urgency ,when we are in the different period and financial situation ,it can help us go through. Second,saving money can improve the power how to manage our money . In the society,the power is necessary.How to manage our money can teach us to make full use of our money.Being careful with money is important for us. Third,in the school-days,most of us ,we have no power earning money .What we use the money is from my parents.It is parents' hard earned money .Do you have the heart to spend their hard-earning money?It's necessary to show consideration for parents. So,it's beneficial to be careful with money.Saving money can improve and teach us many aspects.Saving-sence is needed in daily life.
